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花鬘<ハナカズラ>

Link: http://mfz.karou.jp/k/kingtop.html

Summary: Ritsu was transported to another world. Not understanding the language of the people around her. She is insecure, having suddenly thrown into a world without knowing anything, and literally not know anything even if she tries. Not to mention, before she understands their language, she is already married to the Prince of this country, and still does not know it herself. But Ritsu tries not to show her insecurities, and along with her original personality, she is very active, without stressing herself too much she also slowly grasps their language. (With obvious misunderstandings and obstacles.) On the other side, the prince is in a great dilema of teaching his child-like wife how to speak, with attempts to communicate, and bond like husband and wife should.

Unfortunately, this story is still on hold, left alone since half a year ago. It is a fun, comedic, romance story, but further adventures will have to wait :/

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居候の剣士と高校生のわたし by 芳賀さこ

Romaji Title: Isorou no Kenshi to Kokousei no Watashi

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5948bq/

Summary:

「蒼井 空」は高校二年生で、「超」がつくほどのお人好し。そんな彼女の前に一人の青年が現れた。彼の名は「ティエラ・トレス」。異世界の剣士だと言う。独り暮らしの空と元の世界に帰る術がないトレス。二人のちょっぴり甘く奇妙な同居生活の行方は……。

Longer Summary and Review and Spoilers:

Blue haired blue eyed hot fit well built ikemen suddenly appeared in front of Sora’s apartment. Sora (having a good character) brought the ikemen home (apparently she didn’t know that he was an ikemen until the next day) and on the next day, thanks to the “Miracle Stone (Direct translation i think Pendant would sound better than stone but whatever haha)”, Torres (da ikemen) was able to understand Japanese and briefly of the Japanese Culture even though Torres was from another world (オバジーン). Sora believed in Torres’ story since his clothes were very cosplay like as he was a knight and held a real sword, and allows (or urges wink wink) him to stay over at her place since he has no where to go.

The best part of this story would be here, during the period where Torres lives with Sora, solving his “merging with Japanese Society” problems.

  1. Watching TV
  2. First experience riding a bus and going shopping
  3. Going running and Sora realizing that Torres has no sense of direction
  4. Finding a Job
  5. Introducing Torres to her friends and aunt (Her parents died when she was young and she lives by herself because her Aunt travels frequently)

Through all these trials, they develop feelings for each other (obviously with other lovely dovely moments: IE Sora is beautiful…… not you I mean the sky (Sora means Sky in Japanese)).

Torres then gets into an accident and realizes that he is targeted by people from his world. He is backed into a corner where he had to make the decision to go back to his world, and Sora decides to go with him together after confessing. Torres hugs Sora and jumps into the lake together.

They arrive at the other world, where Torres gets Sora a job at the castle cafeteria in the kitchen and continues with his job as the Queen’s Knight. Due to the language barrier, Torres gives Sora the Miracle Stone, and was then kidnapped by a cray cray man who wanted to kill Torres due to his unfortunate background. That man was killed by Torres and Sora (yes Sora took part in the killing waaaaaaaaah now this part I like since she isn’t just a background weeping character). [Didn’t particularly like this bit because of the girls who liked Torres (the Queen, childhood friend who’s a knight and the city girl) were a bit unreasonable esp the queen, and the time spent between Torres and Sora was shortened by a lot. The plot I thought was too focused on Torres and Sora pov wasn’t explored as well]

Either there are inconsistencies in the plot in regards to the Miracle Stone, or perhaps I missed some information in regards to the stone but for some reason even though the stone was broken in the course of the last fight which saved Torres’ life, Sora was still able to understand the language spoken in the other world.

Sequel

Link To Sequel: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n0557bu/

Basically, the man was reincarnated into a demon called Kanon, and due to demon appearances, he and the castle knights protect the city by killing the Demons, where Kanon accuses Torres for killing his family (in this case, the demons, but he also bared the grudge of his unfortunate background related to Torres’ family). To stop the demons from appearing, Torres throws the Miracle stone (which was broken into 2 pieces and made into a pair ring for Sora’s birthday) into the Fountain of Time (The lake where Torres jumps into to get to Earth and meet Sora in the beginning of the story) and live happily ever after back at earth with Sora on Earth. <– Really brief. I didn’t particularly like the plot. Sora held a really background position.

I love the ending –> Torres decides to throw away everything compared to Sora throwing away everything. Totally approve since Torres can spend more time with Sora at Earth than on the other world 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤

どちらが王妃?by kanaria

Romaji: Dochira ga Ouhi?

English Translated Title: Which one is the Queen?

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1021n/

Summary:

従姉妹と一緒に違う世界に呼び出された私。けれど、必要なのは一人だけだと告げられた。んじゃ、従姉妹が王太子の妃ということにしよう。顔もかわいいし。
残った私は、王宮から逃げ出す途中で変な力を手に入れてしまった。
そのせいで魔王の治める大陸に飛ばされてしまい……へっ?私が魔王の妃?ありえないから。

Long Summary, Review, and Spoilers:

This was a really lighthearted story and a nice read. The main character (Mai) was straight forward and there weren’t any deep mental conflicts or huge conflicts at all. Mai was transported to another world with her cousin Mio to (originally) be the concubine and wife of the prince of the human world who will succeed the throne (Thanks to all dem noble girls who just want to be Queen, trying to get the king using drugs etc etc), but 2 people were summoned. The summoning circle originally only needed 1 magician but 36 magicians were used and funnily you can add categories to the summoning circle to fit the prince’s type of girl (oh how convenient lol). Mai realized that the Prince kept staring at Mio and Mio also fell hard by the Prince’s words and demeanor and so they lived happily ever after.

So what happened to Mai (the real MC of the story)? She stayed in the palace for 1 month, got sick and wanted to run away from the rumors that Mio was a stuck up girl and the MC was a better pick as Queen than her, got Magical powers by force by an unknown and persistent voice and was teleported by her servant(s) to the Demon world to marry the Demon King. Apparently the Demon King also did the same summoning spell, but because he didn’t make a summoning circle, Mai went to the Human world rather than the Demon world. And therefore the MC lives happily ever after.

Yeah that’s basically it, with some events in between, like how there’s the war between the East demon kingdom and West demon kingdom (West is where Mai is at), Mai getting attacked at night by jealous girls who wanted to be Queen themselves, Mai being sad about not seeing the king for a few days and realizing her serious lack of talent with the sword and a genius at knife throwing (which becomes her hobby), and Mai being able with all ten magics (and strong at all of them as well total cheat ability) even though the king can only attempt 9 since he can’t deal with light magic since he’s a demon. Oh also the slow (or not really slow) realization that she liked the king. If only these conflicts were blown bigger it could have become a much better story with a lot more depth.

Ironically after Mai left the Human world, nothing was said about Mio or the Human world ever again. I wonder what happened to them lol. Mai also attempted to learn about the Human world when she was there and then realized she totally wasted her time and had to learn about the Demon world (In which also was slightly useless in the story and could have been developed in more depth as well). The side story of how Ashia (one of the Triplets that served Mai in the Human world and Demon world) loved Feldia even though Ashia was 25 and Feldia was 873, nearing the end of his life span. That was so cute. During the main story, Feldia already died and Ashia realized that he was her other half only after he died, but didn’t chase after him with death because Feldia wouldn’t have liked it and the Demon king also urged her not to.

This story really has potential to be re-written with more depth since everything seemed to just be brushed over. Seriously cute where there was a side story where Mai was with the Demon King’s (Gerald. oops forgot to name him) child and was pregnant, where they were just throwing round names with bad naming sense issues, and conflicting about whether it was a girl or boy.

明日天気になったなら by 桃 春花

Romaji: Ashita tenki ni nattanara

http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8306bo/

Long Summary and Review and Spoilers:

Chitose (Heroine) was a character who was bullied throughout her school life, therefore having a personality that didn’t trust anyone. In the beginning, she was a mentally strong character and I really like that part of her, but as the story went on, she just got too physically weak. Not liking meat or oily food because of her constitution was still bearable but not liking fish just because there were bones………. Too picky (まじで我儘). What if Iris (Hero) and Haruto-sama (King of Roshien & Father) didn’t pick her up then she would really be unable to live a commoners life even though she keeps saying that she wished for it (A life without status). Chitose’s character development could have improved a lot more (especially on the strength bit). Another thing is that she could have better understood her situation with her increased intelligence. Since she can see in the dark I would love to see her use her other dragon abilities.

The first arc really got me into the story. Calm (カラメル公王) is a really well made character. He was evil but not evil where his character setting was where he does one thing but just acomplished other things (which are usually evil) along with it. Loved how Chitose just refused his proposal (using Iris as an excuse was just kinda forced since it was like “Oh because the author needed an excuse to refuse Calm so lets just have Chitose realize her love for Iris now). Otherwise I really like how Chitose wasn’t wishy washy and wanted Calm as a friend and not a lover and cut all ties with him then (and then got back together as friends and sent letters to each other – yeeeeeeeees with him out of the story would’ve been super sad). Calm’s puzzle music box on the last arc was super touching using hiragana and to send a message to Chitose.

I really liked the Toto family arc (4th arc) since she was just kidnapped for laughs due to Dale (Yakuza Waka-sama) trying to propose to Elysha (Toto’s Elder Sister), where Dale appologizes to Chitose by allowing her to step on him while being in a Dogeza. (Plus a few more times for saying that her chest was small. Pity that she didn’t have much strength).

Every time Chitose got drunk, the conversation gets hilarious as she picks verbal fights with everyone, especially the time where Iris got Chitose drunk intentionally knowing that he would get in real big trouble (Chitose made him a manslave/taxi. Good Job. Wouldn’t mind getting a tad bit drunk with this big of a reward). I totally approve of Chitose just giving Haruto Yuyu-hime and got them together in the end. I can’t believe that Yuyu-hime really wanted Chitose to call her mother even though she was only 2 years older (Good on her actually no complaints there).

Chitose getting kidnapped so many times got a little over the top but all was fine because the author made a joke out of it in a special side story that happens after the main story. (All the side stories are here –> http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9336ci/) Iris and Chitose went out on a date, where first, the MC got harassed in a Accessory store, then got hit on by a lolicon in a store causing trouble for the store itself (how dare that lolicon finished the MC’s cake and drink), then got kidnapped. Afterwards Iris was really sick of Chitose getting into trouble (and each crime was getting bigger and bigger, so as a result carried Chitose, but Iris got misunderstood for kidnapping a child and they got in trouble again.

The ending really was rather mellow. The war wasn’t well described, and the knowledge that she gained after gaining a private tutor wasn’t as well used. She was slightly part of the Intelligence Corps, but it would be better if she actually made up her mind to work there. Would actually love to see Iris and Chitose get married and maybe have kids, with Haruto and Yuyu-hime being super doting grandparents, and Calm somehow getting into the scene (I just really want him to have some involvement but cannot imagine how sigh too many possibilities)