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二度目の天使の幸福 by 右枝

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2032ck/

 

生まれ変わると羽根の生えた赤ん坊になっていた主人公。

天使、に似て非なる天使族に生まれた彼女は、父親に育児放棄されるも図太く生きのび、ある日捨てられた子供を拾います。
「ルイトベルトさん天使! 天使族じゃなくて天使!」

 

Summary: A girl woke up as a baby with memories from her past life (though nothing was mentioned within the story about it). Within 30 seconds she was deemed useless and left alone by her father. 3 days later her father came back and realized she was still alive thanks to her healing powers, which were uncommonly seen, and brought her to a house, but well apparently due to the natural nature of the angel clan, being uncaring, she convinced herself that her past experience is there so she can at least stay alive. In a flash, 30 years past, and she found a baby that was thrown away. Remembering her own experience, she decides to raise him up with love, hiding him from the ruthless truth of being born from the angel clan.

三年目のイリス by 現地 晶

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n2690m/

Feels:

The beginning of the story was very interesting. The MC Iris was brought to the Harem in the Palace even though she was really ugly. However after 2 year, and if the King does not visit her room once then she is allowed to go home. On the last day before her departure, she accidentally breaks the rules by going out of the room during non-permitted hours, and meets the king. The king on that night visits her room, and then realizes after the king goes into her room she has to wait for at least 1 year before she can go home again.

After the king visits Iris’ room trouble happens. She gets harassed because the king visits her room by other girls, and the king for some reason was interested in her and visits her room frequently after that night. You know where this is going.

The beginning was really interesting because the harassment does not get to Iris and her friend/maid, and Iris keeps on arguing with the King that she wants to go home so don’t visit my room! But then afterwards the King gets really possessive and lies to her brother that Iris wants to be her queen and stay with him so Iris’ brother would create a destructive weapon to concur more lands, now THAT gave me a sour taste. I stopped at chapter 50 (well I was just skim reading after that bit anyway), and jumped straight to the end. Iris and her friends planned a coup d’etat and assassination attempt for the king so then she can go home, but that fails and she just succumbs to the king and becomes Queen.

I read some of the reviews on syosetsu.com, and apparently the ending is supposed to be a happy ending (written by the author). IDK how to approach to that though it wasn’t as happy as I wanted or imagined it to be so that was a let down. But letting that go, I was really satisfied with the beginning of the story so ah well hahaha.

居候の剣士と高校生のわたし by 芳賀さこ

Romaji Title: Isorou no Kenshi to Kokousei no Watashi

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5948bq/

Summary:

「蒼井 空」は高校二年生で、「超」がつくほどのお人好し。そんな彼女の前に一人の青年が現れた。彼の名は「ティエラ・トレス」。異世界の剣士だと言う。独り暮らしの空と元の世界に帰る術がないトレス。二人のちょっぴり甘く奇妙な同居生活の行方は……。

Longer Summary and Review and Spoilers:

Blue haired blue eyed hot fit well built ikemen suddenly appeared in front of Sora’s apartment. Sora (having a good character) brought the ikemen home (apparently she didn’t know that he was an ikemen until the next day) and on the next day, thanks to the “Miracle Stone (Direct translation i think Pendant would sound better than stone but whatever haha)”, Torres (da ikemen) was able to understand Japanese and briefly of the Japanese Culture even though Torres was from another world (オバジーン). Sora believed in Torres’ story since his clothes were very cosplay like as he was a knight and held a real sword, and allows (or urges wink wink) him to stay over at her place since he has no where to go.

The best part of this story would be here, during the period where Torres lives with Sora, solving his “merging with Japanese Society” problems.

  1. Watching TV
  2. First experience riding a bus and going shopping
  3. Going running and Sora realizing that Torres has no sense of direction
  4. Finding a Job
  5. Introducing Torres to her friends and aunt (Her parents died when she was young and she lives by herself because her Aunt travels frequently)

Through all these trials, they develop feelings for each other (obviously with other lovely dovely moments: IE Sora is beautiful…… not you I mean the sky (Sora means Sky in Japanese)).

Torres then gets into an accident and realizes that he is targeted by people from his world. He is backed into a corner where he had to make the decision to go back to his world, and Sora decides to go with him together after confessing. Torres hugs Sora and jumps into the lake together.

They arrive at the other world, where Torres gets Sora a job at the castle cafeteria in the kitchen and continues with his job as the Queen’s Knight. Due to the language barrier, Torres gives Sora the Miracle Stone, and was then kidnapped by a cray cray man who wanted to kill Torres due to his unfortunate background. That man was killed by Torres and Sora (yes Sora took part in the killing waaaaaaaaah now this part I like since she isn’t just a background weeping character). [Didn’t particularly like this bit because of the girls who liked Torres (the Queen, childhood friend who’s a knight and the city girl) were a bit unreasonable esp the queen, and the time spent between Torres and Sora was shortened by a lot. The plot I thought was too focused on Torres and Sora pov wasn’t explored as well]

Either there are inconsistencies in the plot in regards to the Miracle Stone, or perhaps I missed some information in regards to the stone but for some reason even though the stone was broken in the course of the last fight which saved Torres’ life, Sora was still able to understand the language spoken in the other world.

Sequel

Link To Sequel: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n0557bu/

Basically, the man was reincarnated into a demon called Kanon, and due to demon appearances, he and the castle knights protect the city by killing the Demons, where Kanon accuses Torres for killing his family (in this case, the demons, but he also bared the grudge of his unfortunate background related to Torres’ family). To stop the demons from appearing, Torres throws the Miracle stone (which was broken into 2 pieces and made into a pair ring for Sora’s birthday) into the Fountain of Time (The lake where Torres jumps into to get to Earth and meet Sora in the beginning of the story) and live happily ever after back at earth with Sora on Earth. <– Really brief. I didn’t particularly like the plot. Sora held a really background position.

I love the ending –> Torres decides to throw away everything compared to Sora throwing away everything. Totally approve since Torres can spend more time with Sora at Earth than on the other world 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤

どちらが王妃?by kanaria

Romaji: Dochira ga Ouhi?

English Translated Title: Which one is the Queen?

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1021n/

Summary:

従姉妹と一緒に違う世界に呼び出された私。けれど、必要なのは一人だけだと告げられた。んじゃ、従姉妹が王太子の妃ということにしよう。顔もかわいいし。
残った私は、王宮から逃げ出す途中で変な力を手に入れてしまった。
そのせいで魔王の治める大陸に飛ばされてしまい……へっ?私が魔王の妃?ありえないから。

Long Summary, Review, and Spoilers:

This was a really lighthearted story and a nice read. The main character (Mai) was straight forward and there weren’t any deep mental conflicts or huge conflicts at all. Mai was transported to another world with her cousin Mio to (originally) be the concubine and wife of the prince of the human world who will succeed the throne (Thanks to all dem noble girls who just want to be Queen, trying to get the king using drugs etc etc), but 2 people were summoned. The summoning circle originally only needed 1 magician but 36 magicians were used and funnily you can add categories to the summoning circle to fit the prince’s type of girl (oh how convenient lol). Mai realized that the Prince kept staring at Mio and Mio also fell hard by the Prince’s words and demeanor and so they lived happily ever after.

So what happened to Mai (the real MC of the story)? She stayed in the palace for 1 month, got sick and wanted to run away from the rumors that Mio was a stuck up girl and the MC was a better pick as Queen than her, got Magical powers by force by an unknown and persistent voice and was teleported by her servant(s) to the Demon world to marry the Demon King. Apparently the Demon King also did the same summoning spell, but because he didn’t make a summoning circle, Mai went to the Human world rather than the Demon world. And therefore the MC lives happily ever after.

Yeah that’s basically it, with some events in between, like how there’s the war between the East demon kingdom and West demon kingdom (West is where Mai is at), Mai getting attacked at night by jealous girls who wanted to be Queen themselves, Mai being sad about not seeing the king for a few days and realizing her serious lack of talent with the sword and a genius at knife throwing (which becomes her hobby), and Mai being able with all ten magics (and strong at all of them as well total cheat ability) even though the king can only attempt 9 since he can’t deal with light magic since he’s a demon. Oh also the slow (or not really slow) realization that she liked the king. If only these conflicts were blown bigger it could have become a much better story with a lot more depth.

Ironically after Mai left the Human world, nothing was said about Mio or the Human world ever again. I wonder what happened to them lol. Mai also attempted to learn about the Human world when she was there and then realized she totally wasted her time and had to learn about the Demon world (In which also was slightly useless in the story and could have been developed in more depth as well). The side story of how Ashia (one of the Triplets that served Mai in the Human world and Demon world) loved Feldia even though Ashia was 25 and Feldia was 873, nearing the end of his life span. That was so cute. During the main story, Feldia already died and Ashia realized that he was her other half only after he died, but didn’t chase after him with death because Feldia wouldn’t have liked it and the Demon king also urged her not to.

This story really has potential to be re-written with more depth since everything seemed to just be brushed over. Seriously cute where there was a side story where Mai was with the Demon King’s (Gerald. oops forgot to name him) child and was pregnant, where they were just throwing round names with bad naming sense issues, and conflicting about whether it was a girl or boy.

明日天気になったなら by 桃 春花

Romaji: Ashita tenki ni nattanara

http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8306bo/

Long Summary and Review and Spoilers:

Chitose (Heroine) was a character who was bullied throughout her school life, therefore having a personality that didn’t trust anyone. In the beginning, she was a mentally strong character and I really like that part of her, but as the story went on, she just got too physically weak. Not liking meat or oily food because of her constitution was still bearable but not liking fish just because there were bones………. Too picky (まじで我儘). What if Iris (Hero) and Haruto-sama (King of Roshien & Father) didn’t pick her up then she would really be unable to live a commoners life even though she keeps saying that she wished for it (A life without status). Chitose’s character development could have improved a lot more (especially on the strength bit). Another thing is that she could have better understood her situation with her increased intelligence. Since she can see in the dark I would love to see her use her other dragon abilities.

The first arc really got me into the story. Calm (カラメル公王) is a really well made character. He was evil but not evil where his character setting was where he does one thing but just acomplished other things (which are usually evil) along with it. Loved how Chitose just refused his proposal (using Iris as an excuse was just kinda forced since it was like “Oh because the author needed an excuse to refuse Calm so lets just have Chitose realize her love for Iris now). Otherwise I really like how Chitose wasn’t wishy washy and wanted Calm as a friend and not a lover and cut all ties with him then (and then got back together as friends and sent letters to each other – yeeeeeeeees with him out of the story would’ve been super sad). Calm’s puzzle music box on the last arc was super touching using hiragana and to send a message to Chitose.

I really liked the Toto family arc (4th arc) since she was just kidnapped for laughs due to Dale (Yakuza Waka-sama) trying to propose to Elysha (Toto’s Elder Sister), where Dale appologizes to Chitose by allowing her to step on him while being in a Dogeza. (Plus a few more times for saying that her chest was small. Pity that she didn’t have much strength).

Every time Chitose got drunk, the conversation gets hilarious as she picks verbal fights with everyone, especially the time where Iris got Chitose drunk intentionally knowing that he would get in real big trouble (Chitose made him a manslave/taxi. Good Job. Wouldn’t mind getting a tad bit drunk with this big of a reward). I totally approve of Chitose just giving Haruto Yuyu-hime and got them together in the end. I can’t believe that Yuyu-hime really wanted Chitose to call her mother even though she was only 2 years older (Good on her actually no complaints there).

Chitose getting kidnapped so many times got a little over the top but all was fine because the author made a joke out of it in a special side story that happens after the main story. (All the side stories are here –> http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9336ci/) Iris and Chitose went out on a date, where first, the MC got harassed in a Accessory store, then got hit on by a lolicon in a store causing trouble for the store itself (how dare that lolicon finished the MC’s cake and drink), then got kidnapped. Afterwards Iris was really sick of Chitose getting into trouble (and each crime was getting bigger and bigger, so as a result carried Chitose, but Iris got misunderstood for kidnapping a child and they got in trouble again.

The ending really was rather mellow. The war wasn’t well described, and the knowledge that she gained after gaining a private tutor wasn’t as well used. She was slightly part of the Intelligence Corps, but it would be better if she actually made up her mind to work there. Would actually love to see Iris and Chitose get married and maybe have kids, with Haruto and Yuyu-hime being super doting grandparents, and Calm somehow getting into the scene (I just really want him to have some involvement but cannot imagine how sigh too many possibilities)

ヤンデレ系乙女ゲーの世界に転生してしまったようです by 花木もみじ

http://ncode.syosetu.com/n1039br/

Title (English): It seems like I reincarnated in a Yandere Otome game world

Summary:

Lycoris from young had a adult mindset with a strange sense of deja vu. One day, as Lycoris hears about her fiancee from her father, she suddenly recalls his name as a character in an otome game she played in her previous life. “I am the game’s heroine’s rival position? One who’s killed in a Bad Ending type girl? Your kidding!” The MC works hard to avoid the Yandere happenings around her.

Thoughts about the series (With Spoilers):

I am impressed that this series did not turn into a reverse harem with everyone absolutely adoring the Main Character even with her position as a rival character in the game. She was not seriously oblivious about her feelings for her love, and banzai that she didn’t have awkward flings with other conquerable characters. (She was liked by the other game characters but not to the point that it was love love so all was fine. Friends are important after all yay)

The MC, using her previous knowledge which was fragmented and not all knowing, saved her fiancee and her brother from having a broken childhood causing their minds to be corrupted (therefore a yandere otome game).

  • Wolf was traumatized because he was fed with poison which was cooked by his potential future stepmother which did not go well (In the game the stepmother married his father) and therefore he was a woman hater
  • Shade was traumatized because his father and basically the whole family revered the “red of radiata” (Radiata is the family name of Shade and Lycolis) because people with red hair and eyes usually held great magic power, and Shade had red eyes. His father revered it so much that he went insane where one night he goes to Shade and says “give me your eyes” which is rather traumatizing if said to a 10 year old child really.

At the buildup to the climax of the story, the MC and her fiancee had a serious mental breakdown due to a magic that causes nightmares every time they sleep. It was intense understanding that even though it was a dream it causes serious delusion and misunderstandings between what is real and what is fake. The cure was rather cliche I must admit – When Lycoris told Shade that “Love” was all it needed, though it was interesting that there were brotherly love, fatherly love and love love included, well basically all types of love which would work – But overall the buildup was great since the MC was also unsure about her current life and what happened within the game.

Finally the whole ‘reincarnation’ theme had a solid solution, with Oria having the magic power to know “Possibilities” of what may happen which was written in a book which the MC reads, where Lilyum and Wolfgang’s story being exactly the same as the game she played (Other stories included Altered x Lycolis and Lycolis x Lilyum his imagination is needed and precious in the current character shipping world!). The MC describes words like “Yandere”, “PC Game”, “Otome Game”, “Multiple Choices” (basically words in relation to otome games and how it works, where Oria was very intrigued. Oria then wishes to be reincarnated into a world where such mechanisms exist so he can create such a game, and Lycoris realizes that most probably Oria did reincarnate and made the game that she knew to be a Yandere Game (Which was also what caused all her problems).

It was a really nice read understanding the growth period of the MC. Sadly Wolf x Lycolis ending development wasn’t much (Hilarious that the author wrote side stories where the MC complains about not even having her first kiss) but all is well 😀

リングリング (Ring Ring) by 三国司

Link: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n7439bk/

Summary:

Three years ago, “He” tripped from another world into Shiori’s room. “He” safely returned back to his world, but for some reason, this time Shiori was the one to trip in to his world. Without any one else to rely upon, Shiori sought  to meet with him. However, “He” became a hero.

Feels and more importantly Spoilers. 

This is a love story between two people from different worlds. Initially not understanding each other’s language, Shiori was able to learn some words from the world “He” (Crust) came from and practiced it hoping to use it in the case he ever came back. Fortunately with the singular and limited words that she knew, she was able to live by in the other world without his help, since it was impossible to be granted a meeting with the current hero.

Crust also loved Shiori ever since their meeting 3 years ago. To the point of never washing the cloths he wore after suddenly transported back to his world, and keeping the clothes within his safe along all his treasures, and checking it every day as it was the only memory and evidence that he was with Shiori (Tsukkomi’ed by his magician friend) (yes a serious weirdo but was funny so its all fine).

Shiori goes through the trials of arriving in a different world with no assistance, language barrier, and the inner conflicts of whether to stay within Crust’s world or go back to Japan and go through the pains of finding a Job in the harsh working world. Another reason for her inner (whether to go back to Japan) conflict is because of not knowing whether Crust even remembered her, cared for her, with the rumors of his engagement (Which are obvious lies because Crust is a weirdo who is too in love with Shiori….)

Longer Summary:

After she arrives at Crust’s world, she walks from town to the castle which took 3 hours. She asks the castle guard whether he could fetch Crust, but because he was a hero you have fangirls and so was rejected because Crust would be really busy just meeting all his fans. Returning back to town, Shiori realizes she cannot rely on Crust and has to find work. However with a language barrier, she was rejected by all the shops. She ended at a fancy nightclub bar (basically a fancy place with drinks and food), and begged for a job. It was unsuccessful, but was then overheard by a man that she wanted work by a customer, and was hired. She was fed by this man, but realized that she was to work as a prostitute and wanted to quit. The man requested Shiori to repay the man for the food that she ate. Shiori obviously doesn’t have any money and was to be in deep serious trouble, but the man then suddenly fell asleep. Next to the man, was another man (Roche) who asked whether she wanted to work for him instead (saying that its definitely better than working for that other man and he was only Roche’s customer). To be continued………………