明日天気になったなら by 桃 春花

Romaji: Ashita tenki ni nattanara

http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8306bo/

Long Summary and Review and Spoilers:

Chitose (Heroine) was a character who was bullied throughout her school life, therefore having a personality that didn’t trust anyone. In the beginning, she was a mentally strong character and I really like that part of her, but as the story went on, she just got too physically weak. Not liking meat or oily food because of her constitution was still bearable but not liking fish just because there were bones………. Too picky (まじで我儘). What if Iris (Hero) and Haruto-sama (King of Roshien & Father) didn’t pick her up then she would really be unable to live a commoners life even though she keeps saying that she wished for it (A life without status). Chitose’s character development could have improved a lot more (especially on the strength bit). Another thing is that she could have better understood her situation with her increased intelligence. Since she can see in the dark I would love to see her use her other dragon abilities.

The first arc really got me into the story. Calm (カラメル公王) is a really well made character. He was evil but not evil where his character setting was where he does one thing but just acomplished other things (which are usually evil) along with it. Loved how Chitose just refused his proposal (using Iris as an excuse was just kinda forced since it was like “Oh because the author needed an excuse to refuse Calm so lets just have Chitose realize her love for Iris now). Otherwise I really like how Chitose wasn’t wishy washy and wanted Calm as a friend and not a lover and cut all ties with him then (and then got back together as friends and sent letters to each other – yeeeeeeeees with him out of the story would’ve been super sad). Calm’s puzzle music box on the last arc was super touching using hiragana and to send a message to Chitose.

I really liked the Toto family arc (4th arc) since she was just kidnapped for laughs due to Dale (Yakuza Waka-sama) trying to propose to Elysha (Toto’s Elder Sister), where Dale appologizes to Chitose by allowing her to step on him while being in a Dogeza. (Plus a few more times for saying that her chest was small. Pity that she didn’t have much strength).

Every time Chitose got drunk, the conversation gets hilarious as she picks verbal fights with everyone, especially the time where Iris got Chitose drunk intentionally knowing that he would get in real big trouble (Chitose made him a manslave/taxi. Good Job. Wouldn’t mind getting a tad bit drunk with this big of a reward). I totally approve of Chitose just giving Haruto Yuyu-hime and got them together in the end. I can’t believe that Yuyu-hime really wanted Chitose to call her mother even though she was only 2 years older (Good on her actually no complaints there).

Chitose getting kidnapped so many times got a little over the top but all was fine because the author made a joke out of it in a special side story that happens after the main story. (All the side stories are here –> http://ncode.syosetu.com/n9336ci/) Iris and Chitose went out on a date, where first, the MC got harassed in a Accessory store, then got hit on by a lolicon in a store causing trouble for the store itself (how dare that lolicon finished the MC’s cake and drink), then got kidnapped. Afterwards Iris was really sick of Chitose getting into trouble (and each crime was getting bigger and bigger, so as a result carried Chitose, but Iris got misunderstood for kidnapping a child and they got in trouble again.

The ending really was rather mellow. The war wasn’t well described, and the knowledge that she gained after gaining a private tutor wasn’t as well used. She was slightly part of the Intelligence Corps, but it would be better if she actually made up her mind to work there. Would actually love to see Iris and Chitose get married and maybe have kids, with Haruto and Yuyu-hime being super doting grandparents, and Calm somehow getting into the scene (I just really want him to have some involvement but cannot imagine how sigh too many possibilities)

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